I debated continuing my raypunk inspired piece for this month, but rapidly realized it was difficult for that to fit within this month’s theme. Taking a departure from the aesthetics and retro-futurism of raypunk for this month WEP contest piece, without managing to fail at the self-assigned challenge. Rethinking what I could create within the context of the theme, going towards Greek Mythology. Taking some inspiration from that, and realizing how quickly I could fuse those elements with the Clockwork Punk ideals. While Clockwork Punk is similar in aesthetics to Steampunk, the former takes a heavy focus on gears. In addition to that Clockwork Punk works within a great symbiosis with magic and alchemy. Combining all those elements, I began to shape the tale below. A story I titled, “Fixing Fate.”
Fixing Fate
Someone faintly knocked on the door to my workshop, barely audible over the sound of moving gears. With reluctance, I got up to answer the door, curious to know who could be knocking at this late hour. Opening the door a smudge, seeing scrawny women dressed in a tight-fitting white dress. Her face obscured under a thick white veil, held in place with an ornate antique band of gold. The flames from gear powered torch reflecting against her dress.
With a raspy voice, she asked: “I’m seeking Cornelius Flamel, are you he?”
Glancing past the women to make sure she was alone before answering “That depends on who is asking,” since I had decided to hide my family’s name from all but a select few.
She responded “A woman whose existence is older then you can imagine. The Greeks called me Clotho, while your father knew me as Amaryllis.”
My father had told me once of a mysterious woman with the name. He didn’t say much about her, other then she imparted great knowledge to him. Opening my door farther waving her in, knowing that if my father trusted her, she possessed great character. Grabbing a brass lever by the door, rotating it clockwise. Using its mechanical energy to brighten the ceiling lights of my workshop. Locking the door before glancing at the woman, whose eyes seemed to be scanning the room. Now noticing she had brown patchwork clock bag over her shoulder, that was glowing faintly from the inside.
Amaryllis said “While I’m uncertain what your father told you about me, I know he taught you privately. Sharing his vast knowledge on various subjects,” walking over to a big machine hidden under a cloth. Dropping the bag before grabbing the dirty cloth, pulling it off with a flourish. Revealing a steel loom, that was empty of fabric. Intricate gears ran throughout the machine’s interior. Engraved into the metal were alchemic symbols, that had been filled in with white paint. A golden lever ran itself out the center of the body. “While I regret sharing the designs for this machine but, I’m glad it now. While this may appear to be an ordinary loom Cornelius, this one only works on one particular material. I need you to rebuild the strings of fate that are within the bag. This machine will restore their potency, allowing the world to continue it’s onward,” kneeling some and placing something inside the interior mechanical workings.
Walking toward the loom, I could feel a strange power radiating off the machine I couldn’t explain. The energy the device was emitting was forcing a powerful tingling sensation to ascend up through my right arm. Its focal point seemed to be the ring I inherited from my father.
Amaryllis said “It is time for you to get work Cornelius,” stepping back from the machine. Walking out the door, without saying another word.
Reaching into the bag, she left behind pulling out split clean-cut golden threads. Feeling a slight warmth come off the thread as I fed it to the machine. Pressing down on the brass pedal with my right foot, pulling more of cloth into the loom. Watching the machine re-weave the thread as more of fate’s strings were slowly pulled into the loom. The alchemical symbols engraved onto the loom beginning to match the glow of the strange jewel Amaryllis placed it. Somehow the combination was restoring the golden glow of the strings. Being mesmerized by the lights as I worked on the fractured yarn.
Losing track of time as something tapped me on the shoulder. Glancing back over my shoulder, I saw Amaryllis had returned. Looking almost revitalized despite the white veil that covered her face. Walking over to the where the loom had collected the restored thread. Placing the bundle inside in a black wooden box with antiqued brass hardware, with great care. The bin was free of any symbols, or carvings that could indicate how the container would hide the restored energy of the string. Slamming the box’s lid down, before vanishing into the dark again. Leaving the strange jewel, she placed into the loom behind. Its glow barely a flicker of what it was previously. Making it appear as if it was nothing more than an ordinary ruby, despite its size. Lifting the ruby carefully, I noticed it was the exact match for small ruby in my father’s ring.
With the ruby in hand, I walked towards an old trunk I had uncovered a few days ago. Setting the jewel on an old cloth I placed on the vault. Patiently wrapping it around the gemstone, before opening the chest. Putting it in the chest, knowing it should be forgotten. My father had inadvertently bound our bloodline with this jewel. For better or worse, I would have to protect the strange jewel as well; even I didn’t want to. It seems I had inadvertently altered my destiny by repairing fate’s string. Wondering if this was something else I inherited from my father’s passing.
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Fixing Fate is a HUGE responsibility for any family. An intriguing tale – thank you.
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Thanks.
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Fixing fate can be tricky. I love the name and mystery of Amaryllis. Alchemy is an interesting subject and this story may be the beginning of a new series?? Very atmospheric! Looking forward to more.
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Glad you enjoyed it. I agree with the name Amaryllis, it has a natural old world sense to it. I’m not sure honestly if I want to continue this or not. Thanks
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Christopher, I hadn’t heard of Clockwork Punk before, although I’m familiar with Steampunk genre. Was so interesting with the gears working etc. The bloodline jewel adds an interesting twist.
Thanks for participating in WEP, Christopher. Always lots to think about after reading…
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It is something that doesn’t get much representation, in my opinion. Which is unfortunate since you can add in fantasy elements and have then naturally flow. Thanks.
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An awesome tale. Loved her name, it is certainly fantastic, mystical. A lot of intrigue going on in this tale, and it would be interesting to see how she “changed his fate” and how the jewel all fits in. I liked your take on yarn.
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Thanks. I agree. Sometimes fate intervenes directly, while other times it stands in the shadows.
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Interesting story and a huge responsibility – fixing fate.
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Indeed. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Fate a tricky word
fixing it or changing it
now that even trickier
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Yes, indeed
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I’m not sure what I think after reading your story. I mean whether it was bad or good to meddle into something that may have been better to stop. Either way, you did a good job of pulling me into your story.
Shalom aleichem,
Pat G
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Sometimes your hand is forced to act. Thanks Pat
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Hi Christopher – interesting take … and introducing us to clockwork punk. I’m sure this could be broadened out … I want to know how to the two jewels tie in together, and why they are hidden – but also Clotho … does she come back and help you as you learn new things … fascinating stories – cheers Hilary
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Hello Hilary,
I imagine it could if I bolstered more of the fantasy elements. Granted I could have written how the two jems are connected, but I gave out a couple hints. Mainly the name Flammel, and the alchemic story elements to let the readers connect the two.
Cheers, Chris
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I like tales of magic, and legends, so this appeals to me. What was the father that he had such friends with amazing powers, such as controlling FATE. I do believe in Fate. That is a lovely old sounding name just like the flower. Very nice/.
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Maybe instead of asking what, you should be asking who instead. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks
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Interesting take on the prompt. Not familiar with Clockwork Punk but I like classical mythology. Faxing Fate is not to be undertaken lightly.
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Thanks. That is indeed true.
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When it comes to fate, so many a string can go wrong if tugged the wrong way. A huge task indeed. Be interesting how the jewel intertwines things further.
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That is definitely true Pat.
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Interesting and imaginative story. I liked the idea of reweaving or repairing Fate with the loom and Amaryllis’ magic touch.
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Thanks. I wanted to do something unique and I think I achieved that.
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I’m not a big reader of punk fiction, but this one was so intriguing! I hope you wrote more on this particular story!
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Thanks. I haven’t decided what I want to do with it. Would make a good start for a short story, or small novella.
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I learned something new today. I didn’t previously know about Clockwork Punk, and I’m glad I do now. This is a well-written and engaging piece. You truly never know what may come from fiddling with fate,
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Thanks. Indeed.
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